deathslayer's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Red Eyes]

Nice girl,

Everything on the girl seems in proportion.

The gun however is not that well drawn.

But the red-eyes logo is really really nice, love it.

[Vampire Hunter D]

Really like the eyes.

The mouth is questionable though.

KittyKat87 responds:

Yeah, I know. I tried several times but couldn't quite get it to look right. =P

Thanks for the comment. =)

[elf and goblin showdown]

Nice.

The goblin looks a little bit like a zombie though. But thats nit picking.

[Marge vs Lois]

I think Marge wins.

...Yesh....yesh she does :3

[more from the sketchbook]

This is beautiful.

Whoever this girl is, she is beautiful, like this is...my god, you should be a comic book artist, or something bigger.

[Ribbon Kistune Collab]

It's ok.

Needs a little work.

The tail on the girl is pretty good, just that even though the picture is anime style, you still should add more of a fur texture to the tail.

Her hips are a little screwed up. I don't know why but the hips just look....weird.

Overall its an ok picture, just needs some work :D

Sanchez150894 responds:

Shukumei: "True, there could be better texture, but there's no real way for me to do that without cluttering up the tail. Besides, I think Sanchez did fine in that respect.
I tried to make the hips look like she was shifting her weight, but I guess it didn't work out. :|"

well, I tried to make the tail as furry as I could (talking of the shadings)

[Dead hand pg.6]

Awesome!

Love the style of your art. I can't find anything wrong with this lil' comic.

So nice job!

[Doubles 9 Perfect Storm]

You could do better.

like, seriously, this sucks! Both of them look crooked, the girl on the right looks terrible, the sword for the girl on the left sucks, it just sucks.

The value you put in? None. No value what so ever.

The best thing about this whole picture is the bar code, but I woulden't buy this if it were a comic.

Try again.

AwesomeSaurus responds:

I don't know what you mean by value, but sadly it is the most constructive thing you said. Just saying "it sucks, sucks. . . .sucks." is not helpful at all. Yeah, the bar code is sweet, took a whole like 2 minutes. . as for the rest? Well I spent at the very least 5 hours on my character.

Perhaps YOU should try again?

[Lady Killer]

Wow, lovin' it.

Like one of those low budget cardboard cut out animations, very nice.